Reading the horrific stories with my fellow peers they were absolutely outraged at the concept of identity theft. They could never grasp thought of taking another innocent being’s money and identity. They were discussing the matter and thought those awful people doing the crime should take a good look at themselves, they could never begin to think about treating such a person in that way, it is a horrendous thought that our own identity could be taken from a criminal.
In this paragraph I have used very formal language in 3rd person. This would make it feel like I am reliable and trustworthy, and that my I am accurate with my information.
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